Supporting Piece Feedback

After reviewing the first supporting piece with my friends and Media Studies teacher, I was able to see that the first poster myself and Lauren had produced, was not suitable for our supporting piece. This came down to the following reasons:

• The text did not wrap around the bottle well .
• The shadowing was too much for the poster and was rather uneccessary.
• The image as a whole was too dark making the writing hard to read.
• There is too much information on the bottle and is hard for people to read.

Lauren and myself had a brainstorming session to rectify these problems. We both knew that the general idea was a clever concept but had to come up with ways to make our poster more appealing. We found solutions to tackle our issues with our first supporting piece. These are as follows:

• To produce our own label to put around the bottle of Reggae Reggae Sauce to make the text naturally curve and wrap around the bottle.
• To take a picture of the bottle with a crisp white background to keep the poster simple.
• Keep the image natural without adding any lighting effects as last time it seemed to overpower the poster and make the text harder to read.
• Put less writing on the bottle and have the description next to the bottle.